The entire story revolves around a group of three people who have been living in the cabin for almost five years. I know that the limited amount of dialouge that's present has been done many times before but that's the point. My little story could be taking place during any number of movies that you've seen a thousand times. I'm not trying to add anything to the formula. I'm only trying to make a droplet of it my own. At this point in time I'm almost 50 pages in and overall I'm pleased with it. I didn't want to post too much of it because I was afraid noone would bother reading it. I sincerely thank you for the compliment on my writing ability.
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