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MojoNexus
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Re: Here's the opening for my story. Thoughts?
02/09/08 06:39 PM

Granted, I don't know where it goes from here, it may make perfect sense in the big picture scheme of things, but it feels too much like a homage to films we already know. You write well, but the hard work is taking the reader or the viewer somewhere new or different.

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Here's the opening for my story. Thoughts?	DanielSavage	02/09/08 04:24 PM
Re: Here's the opening for my story. Thoughts?	MojoNexus	02/09/08 06:39 PM
Re: Here's the opening for my story. Thoughts?	DanielSavage	02/09/08 10:47 PM

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