HorrorSpeak---Terror Awaits You in Every Forum!!!!: Looking for some Critique.

I've been working this idea in my head for about a year and a half now in one way or another, but just now started writing it down. On the pages I'm writing on, what you have there is 14 pages, I'm using microsoft word.

I plan on directing this myself, or sending it off a little, but I really want to be a director, just to make my own films, but I'm also fine with being a writer. So I'm writing it as big time as I can, and I'll worry about practicality when I get there, and make what of it I can. And hopefully one day be able to make the actual vision of it.

But I can pretty much act those scenes out, and got storyboards, shots, and pacing in mind. And the way it's mapped out I think will be at least 20 minutes, but the rape sequence is pretty brutal, and long. She's raped by three men, and sliced up by one, then shot in the head, and severely beaten before that.

I'm looking to make quite a shocking sequence here, ala what I spit on your grave wishes it was. I'm really into subversive, testy shit like that. VERSUS or andrey iskanov stuff, I figure if I could make a movie that looks 1/2 as good as versus I'll shit myself.

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