Smoke Signals

Fade in:

We see wilderness from an aerial viewpoint. The sun is setting in the distance. Mountainous terrain is all that can be seen in any direction. Numerous streams serpentine throughout the valleys, they are concealed in many places by massive evergreens and dense thickets of brush. Vaguely in the background a radio transmission can be heard.

Radio Voice:

Reports of the airborne virus are coming in from every corner of the globe. Military personnel have been dispatched in large urban areas as the president has now declared martial law in all large U.S. cities.

Aerial viewpoint:

We now see a plume of smoke in the distance beyond a ridgeline on the horizon. A large group of deer are standing at a stream to drink directly below.

Radio Voice:

We are now receiving word that the death toll in Pittsburgh is estimated to hit the 250,000 mark as the government ordered evacuation was impeded by a huge number of infected civilians. The air strike is being called a disaster of epic proportions.

Aerial viewpoint:

Coming over the ridge we now see the source of the smoke that’s billowing thick and grey. A small cabin can be seen, it’s completely surrounded on all sides by a crude fence made of logs of different circumference. Bodies, both human and animal lie around the fence in varying levels of decomposition. The camera spirals downward into the roof.

Fade out:

Title text appears on the screen for a few seconds and then fades away.

Radio Voice:

We are now turning over to the emergency broadcast system. God be with us.

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